Why go to university?
All universities are the most important parts of human's life, and they give several benefit to people and young adults.These are often positives although there are a few disadvantages.
First of all, all children, all teenagers and other people would like to be social in their life where they work, live or study, and especially youngs want to improve their life positively.For that, people usually travel, play game, go to cinema or do any other activities.But, youngs who may go to universities could join universities for their socializations.That approach raises their abilities and behaviours which make their life with their school environment.
Also, nowadays there are many different technologic improvements all over the world.These are sometimes equipments such as cellphones, sometimes experiences which about new military tools, etc.These new explorations investigate in the universities usually.For that, big companies and factories usually give money to universities for their beneficial developments.Students in the universities always be as fast as in the new equipments and tools.
In addition, all of our people want to have good job, and all youns too.But, some of them catch take succededly and other not.If people want to get a qualities job such as engineer,scientist, pilot etc they have to graduate from the best universities like MIT(USA),METU(TURKEY).The others who do not go universities never earn enough money from good jobs.
In contrast, there is one disadvantage that students may take a drug from friends who studying with the in the universities.These come from bad friends.
In my opinion, although there is a disadvantage there are several advantages.All universities are necessity for our community and world.Some students and parents do not want to join universities, but the most part of people would take education degree overwhelmingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59233449477 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62323100776 2.67179642975 136% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.1344086022 233% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.150831134 48.9658058833 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.5 100.406767564 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8333333333 20.6045352989 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 5.45110844103 284% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181029926791 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855300045235 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470362765736 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855300045235 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470362765736 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 11.7677419355 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 58.1214874552 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.002688172 310% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.0537634409 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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