Nowadays our lives are receiving a lot of information in different ways, because of the access to information today is very easy, life became better.
First of all, the way that we send information has changed dramatically in a short period of time. In the past, before the globalization of the internet, we needed to write a letter and go to the postal shop to send a information. This letter delayed a few days to arrive at the destination, but the problem was because a lot of things could happen during this time in addition, it costed money. Since we have started to use emails to make these communications, receiving this message, today is almost instantly, just a few seconds for the person read the email. I have a good example of this two situations, the first one is when I started to date with my wife, which is a romantic person, I always sent a letter to her when I needed to say something important, sometimes this information had changed when she received it. On the other hand, today when I have something to tell her, I only send an email and she is going to receive it. Now imagine all this inside of all environments, company, offices, industry, family how our lives became best and faster.
Additionally, because we have access to all variety of information today is easier to check the authenticity of anything. Some people nowadays take advantages from the internet in a wrong way, people with additionally, because we have access to all variety of information today is easier to check the authenticity of anything. Some people nowadays take advantages from the internet in a wrong way, people with serious problems, by the way, using fake news, which is when a person spreads fake new. But what we have in fact is that there is a lot of information to use. When I was a student I used a lot some sites to do my research at the information that I needed i found there, some articles that i have founded, were serious problems, by the way, using fake news, which is when a person spreads fake new. On the other hand, nowadays is very easy to check if the new is true or fake.
In conclusion, internet together with technology, makes our decisions and communication faster and greater than the past even though we need to spend a few minutes to check the veracity of the messenger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day is very easy, life became better. First of all, the way that we send infor...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ion has changed dramatically in a short period of time. In the past, before the globalization ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...etter and go to the postal shop to send a information. This letter delayed a few ...
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Line 3, column 892, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...en I have something to tell her, I only send an email and she is going to receive it. Now ima...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... how our lives became best and faster. Additionally, because we have access to ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...adays take advantages from the internet in a wrong way, people with additionally, because we h...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...adays take advantages from the internet in a wrong way, people with serious problems, by the w...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...search at the information that I needed i found there, some articles that i have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, by the way, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6004842615 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74740418371 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3230665147 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5333333333 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188779264062 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736112226258 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049636154801 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114401383024 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059178690263 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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