The Internet emmerged not so long ago, but it has already dramatically changed many aspects of our lives. At this point, it is impossible to say if those changes were solely for the better or worse since the consequences are still ambigious. I am ambivalent about how the increased availability of information influences our life today as it is clearly a two-edged sword.
First of all, it has brought a certain advantage to our life by making it much easier. Now we do not have to go to the library to prepare for a test or write an essay, we can simply "google" it or open a Wikipedia article. We do not have to go to the hospital as telemedicine field is burgeoning. We even do not have to go the post office anymore thanks to the emmergance of e-mals services. All of these shows how the widespread use of the Internet gives us many new opportunities. People who cannot go to university can learn by reading or even listening and watching the articles, podcasts, videos that are out there.
Secondly, it has brought a lot of new jobs and ways for earning side income. For example, now there are jobs such as bloggers, influencers, youtubers that we already considered as normal as teachers and managers. What they do is simply sharing the information that they have with their communitiy. Therefore, the Internet has given a rise to a new economy of information.
However, it has certainly negatively influenced some businesses: the businesses with an old operational model that have not reajusted it to the new realities are, unfortunately, subjets to huge losses and possible eventual bankrupcy. Consider a telling example of Tom Cook - a famous travel agency that has been on the market for over 50 years - that a couple of weeks ago claimed that it was out of business. Experts say that this was mostly due to the growing usage of the Internet where now people can find all the required information for a trip as well as book hotels and flights on their own, without any intermidiaries.
Another negative consequence of the increase in the availability of information is that it has diminished to some extent people's creativity and made them lazier. Nowadays it requires little effort to look for certain information since we can seach for keywords on the Internet or visit forums where it is possible to can get answers to the questions immediately. What is more, it gave rise to the plagiatrism, copyright issues and more.
In the final analysis, the widespread use of the Internet has undoubtedly influenced our lives in many ways. Some of them are positive, while some are negative. In order to make the Internet work for the greater good, we must focus on how to make this influence beneficial and how to avoid or at least mitigate the possible negative consequences assosiated with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8206185567 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93141701038 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527835051546 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4759833272 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0454545455 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221805108097 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600416716465 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688415748964 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113614279234 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424464069431 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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