The advent of computers and their integration into various fields has made work in a peculiar way. Work, nowadays, requires the expenditure of intense long hours. People are deteriorating mentally, by involving in such laborious tasks for a long time. In my view, appointing the same workers to different tasks would abate the current situation of fatigue in today's working class. I feel this way for two reasons which I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.
First of all, doing mundane work leads to boredom. This statement applies for all ages and even all occupations as well. Students feel uninteresting going to school after some weeks after joining. Stress and burden, which are obvious for employee, is in part because of routine work. Though there are few cases where the vocation becomes interesting with new turns and challenges, nonetheless they fall into a minority. Similarly, a lot number of employees, even our friends or relatives, feel fatigued a few months after joining in a job. People have been gloomy about their progress, thinking they are stuck in a boring work all the time, right from the dawn of the 21st century.
Consequently, everyone is keen on experiencing a lot of things than their previous generation would not even be thought of. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Right after my graduation, I was hired by a multinational company. During the first 6 months, every aspect of my work felt interesting. Moreover, I felt very content for having placed in the job. Nonetheless, after a few months, I was tired of the environment. I was performing the same tasks all week with utter dismay. This is the case with almost every person in this generation.
Secondly, performing the same tasks every day for a long time has a significant impact on your brain. Mental muscles need exercise or else they wear down like a car left out in a garage for many years. Performing different tasks, or at least tasks with varied difficulty trains your brain to improve. Even students, if coerced for only studying, may feel fatigued due to lack of physical exercise. On the other hand, stress also increases as they are provided sufficient amounts of relaxation and refreshments, which are obtained by a few hours of physical training or sports. Research also suggests that involving disparate activities, different areas of the brain become robust. Most people also seek to travel a lot only to glean new experiences in their already banal lives.
In conclusion, although every task at first may seem interesting but executing the same routine leads to mental degradation and discontentment. Performing various tasks in an unorganized way alleviates this, which satiates the self and also improves self confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a peculiar way" with adverb for "peculiar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ation into various fields has made work in a peculiar way. Work, nowadays, requires the expenditu...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to employee'.
Suggestion: obvious to employee
...r joining. Stress and burden, which are obvious for employee, is in part because of routine work. Th...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an unorganized way" with adverb for "unorganized"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...iscontentment. Performing various tasks in an unorganized way alleviates this, which satiates the sel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, at least, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07658643326 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84169010597 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577680525164 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3046478183 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7586206897 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1724137931 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169697130537 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040865360365 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382394311458 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880996946149 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241259002994 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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