Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout life's long and tortuous journey, most of our time and energy will be spent on working. There are manifold works through which people make a living and provide for their families and beloved ones. Since working is a very major part of our daily life, it is of utmost importance for us to make sure we are satisfied with our work in terms of being content with its kind of activity, income, coworkers and environment. In this regard, some people hold the position that workers are more satisfied when they do many deifferent types of tasks that doing a similar one all day long. As far as I'm concerned, the statement is true, for the reasons to come.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that doing a similar task everyday could become tremendously boring, tedious and humdrum, making working a living hell for workers. As we all know, humans in nature crave for experiencing and discovering new things, aspects and activities. This tendency originates in our strong sense of curiosity, which we all love to satisfy. We have all felt content, pleased and satisfied whenever our curiosity is addressed. Doing various types of tasks everyday can somehow satisfy our curiosity and tendency to explore new aspects of work. By doing so, we will be more willing to go to work, and on the top of that, we will be more encouraged and motivated to do our duties and assigned tasks with full effort, focus, commitment, dedication and determination. Consequently, we will end up stigmatized as a hard working and devoted worker, being praised by everyone, from colleages and coworkers, all the way to managers and bosses. All of these mean more satisfaction with our work. On the other hand, doing a same task day and night will gradually become more and more quotidian, making us less interesed in it, which results in us doing the task reluctantly and on with passion. Hence, our performance will start to flag, because we will feel that we are trapped in the job and there is no way out and we are forced to do this monotonous task. When an activity is not much of a fun for us, we will do it with least efficiency and it is highly likely that we will not put our best on doing it, making us less satisfied with both ourselves and with the job itself. As you can see, doing various tasks a day can bring about more benefits for workers.
Another significant factor regarding this issue is that doing many defferent tasks provides us with more chances and opportunities to improve our performance than doing a similar task everyday. It is obvious that when we do a same task all day long, we will get used to it after a while, because we have already mastered everything that is needed to that task through time and myriad error and test procedures. There is not even a chance to do a mistake, let alone improving your performance in it. For example, one of my friends works as a typist in the campus of Ferdowsi University of Mashhad. At first, he was very slow in typing, but gradually, he managed to learn how to conduct a typing with both hands and ten fingers. But since then, he has stuck at this level, and there is nothing new to learn and put into practice. Thus, he is not satisfied that much with his work, since he has no opportunity to improve. On the other hand, when assigned with various tasks every day, there is always chances to come up with new ideas, methods and ways to do them with more efficiency. We can always implement innovations to improve our performance, so that we can enhance our abilities and skills, and therefore, earn more reputation and income. Also, the working will be more active and dynamic, providing us an atmosphere conducive for a hard worker.
In sum, although doing similar tasks every day can have some advantages such as less responsibilites and less risk of doing mistakes, from my point of view, doing various tasks is more beneficial. Not only can it motivate us to work with more passion because it is not boring, We can also improve our performances in various tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3331.0 1977.66487455 168% => OK
No of words: 718.0 407.700716846 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63927576602 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17643912491 4.48103885553 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58375015295 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 212.727598566 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456824512535 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1050.3 618.680645161 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6888576057 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.862068966 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7586206897 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68965517241 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314111638738 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097899242294 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10380986797 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227967840615 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177291226872 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 86.8835125448 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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