Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that all of people by habit need like variety in their live and tast from reapite.Through a quick watching to a our around we see that our world created based on alteration everyday and everymoment, like alteration of seasens and light and dark in a day.
Thus, we naturally love variety and our job can not separeat from this law. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that we live in the world that we cannot the freedom of choicing everythings that we wants, and in some case for example our jobs the reeapite not only is not dad circumstance but can be led to increase in efficiency of emploees output. I, to agreat extent agree with this idea that workers have better feeling when they have different types of tasks during day.
First and foremost, our job build one of most important portion of each people life. Sometimes having a good and satisfy job can be led to people forgoten another bad situation in their life and have hope and happynees in their life. On the other hand, a bad unsatisfied job can be led to person left his calm and mental healthy. Based on this fact, most of people naturally preferred variety on their task because it is led to they fined good feeling about themselves and knows that they are helpful people for our society.
On another significant fact that should be taken into the consideration is that whemn people have a rutin and just some special reapiting taks after some times they lost their interest to their task and doing that with lower attention, that can be led to deacreses on productivity of person and company. In addition, when people just have similar task always, in the long time their knowlege decline because who do not used from it, and if the person want to chang his job who cannot have large opportunity of choices.Because his knowlege become old and ineffective and also who do not achieved additional experince or skill on his fied on study.
On the bases of reasens that mentioned above, I am convinced that workers are more happy and satisfy to ahave different task than have similar task everyday. because of, natural human habit and psychological concepts and also importance of keeping their mind uptodat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Through
...ety in their live and tast from reapite.Through a quick watching to a our around we see...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rom reapite.Through a quick watching to a our around we see that our world create...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'our'?
Suggestion: a; our
...rom reapite.Through a quick watching to a our around we see that our world created ba...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t our world created based on alteration everyday and everymoment, like alteration of sea...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...freedom of choicing everythings that we wants, and in some case for example our jobs ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...and mental healthy. Based on this fact, most of people naturally preferred variety on their ta...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...annot have large opportunity of choices.Because his knowlege become old and ineffective...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e different task than have similar task everyday. because of, natural human habit and ps...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...t task than have similar task everyday. because of, natural human habit and psychologic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7193877551 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52562358022 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522959183673 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4887099541 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.166666667 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222412843528 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857970914883 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10546275112 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120968256691 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608785453438 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.