Jobs is one of the most controversial issue these days. They are several significant factors which should be considered when it comes to doing variety type of tasks during the workday it will provide an inordinate number of opportunity for workers to take advantages, I would explore some of this advantageous which are more conspicuous for me in following paragraphs.
The first prominent point to be mentioned is that when the workforce has many different types of tasks to do during the workday it will provide them with the opportunity they can gain more experience and learn different skills. For example, when I was 25 I used to work for company that the manager always constantly changed her mind about what she wanted employees to do, at the first I was frustrated form her behavior but after a while I figured out I gained a lot of experience and it helped me to broaden my knowledge in variety of subject.
The second significant points that should be taken into consideration is, doing one single task results in an unpleasant routine of work which resulting unhealthy behaviors and illnesses, nevertheless, several tasks require workers to move and be active, creating an engaging environment. When my dad used to work in a pharmaceutical company, due to the number of repetitive movements he had to do and sedentary work-style, he constantly complained about feeling pain on his shoulder, therefore he had to spend a huge amount of money to participate in physiographic classes in order to alleviate his pain which was not effective.
The last but not least, majority of people willing to do the same task because they don’t have adequate confidence to start new tasks, in my opinion in fast-changing world workers need to be flexible, it is great opportunity to evaluate ourselves to initiate new tasks and it will raise job satisfaction. And also it will impact on our privet life either.
To make a long story short, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming. Doing a different type of tasks in workday have a positive effect on the privet life and even society.
- TOEFL T P O 40 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons. 42
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...entioned is that when the workforce has many different types of tasks to do during the workday...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, even so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96398891967 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01957355414 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559556786704 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.469950665 48.9658058833 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.2 100.406767564 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1 20.6045352989 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318919857007 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120347484889 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099249006221 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175653165693 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478268040967 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 11.7677419355 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.