working time
While there may are lots of people who prefer to have a job where we work only three days a week for long hours, but from my perspective, I would rather to have a job where we work five days a week for shorter hours.
First of all, working three days a week may means that we have to spend more than eight hours on work, it is really exhausting. And too long working time always leads to illness, because we do not have enough time to exercise. For example, I have heard that my cousin Jack when he graduated from college, he got a excellent job as a engineer. He had a good salary, but at the same time, he had to work for morn than 10 hours a day. For a long period, I can not even meet him. After a year, Jack got a severe insomnia which makes him so haggard. As a result, Jack had to quit the job and now he works for much shorter hours which makes him looking much better.
Furthermore, working five days a week can help me to do better everyday. Because I can have enough time to relax and get enough energy to confront with everyday’s issues. For example, my good friend Sue works in a primary school as a math teacher. She only have to work for five hours a day so that she can have more time to prepare for the lessons. In the end of last year, Sue got a prize for her excellent teaching. She told me that if she had to work for longer time, she would not have enough vigor to tackle each severe problems, so she feels really satisfying about the short working time.
In brief, based on the previous discussion, I would prefer to have a job where we work five days a week for shorter hours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... when he graduated from college, he got a excellent job as a engineer. He had a g...
^
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...from college, he got a excellent job as a engineer. He had a good salary, but at ...
^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ve days a week can help me to do better everyday. Because I can have enough time to rela...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...mary school as a math teacher. She only have to work for five hours a day so that sh...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, while, for example, in brief, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11111111111 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.197174025 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6805185848 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341071296422 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136182766583 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117442389405 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210114078542 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102088060557 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 10.9000537634 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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