The world today faces a lot of problems. Outline a few of these problems and suggest some things
that ordinary people could do to make the world a better place.
Problems that world faces have major impact on people's lives and likewise their self-esteem. Although, there are potentials to find solutions for all global issues, we are still far from the there. I will point out some of the problems in the following essay.
Fist of all, there are inequality in numerous fields. Some people are more preferred to work for companies rather than others with same qualities and knowledge, however different religious, sexual orientation or nationalities. Discrimination is commonly issue among some nations and as a modern society we must undermine it. The process has started as a form of caveat and I will never forget how 3 years ago people with different sexuality were on stake against xenophobia. At a positive glance many more people affiliated the protest, and year after a small positive light was seen. If those people had not gone to fight against prejudices, changes would not have been available. Everyone has his own choice, therefore we must tolerate their choices even though different from our perceptions.
What's more is that lately, the world has faced exponential pollution. No one can deny that multitudinous factories emit greenhouse gases that are noxious for humanity. Moreover, unceasing car movement emit fumes and unleaded gases that are toxic. According to researches and statistics Shanghai is one of the most polluted cities in the world and moreover it is dense populated. Consequently, many people might get sick or suffer form respiratory diseases. As it is not only Shanghai, but also many other metropolises immediate solutions are need. For example, a solution might be when all vehicles substitute fossil fuels with bio fuels or introducing of the electric cars.
Lastly but not least, the world is to repeal the terrorism which has engulfed the world. Many extremist organizations soared and carry out attacks due to their religious beliefs or following genocide over other nations. Innocent people are in big threat, if something doesn't change in a better way. Many seeking for refugee and tranquil life in normal countries, because they suffer from poverty and hunger. However, we should not mistake them as emigrants that search for life in other countries after they learn a particular language. Punctilious immigration measures are need it to prevent terrorist attacks and find refugees only for those who are not potential threat and give them civil rights.
In conclusion, there are many global problems that have to be solved and wee humans have the ability to make things happen. Some of that are inequalities based of racial, sexual and national differences. Also, a pollution is a sever danger around the world and we are a interdependent society should find a solution. Along with that, people's lives are at stake from terrorism and many places have been destroyed, some part of UNESCO.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, lastly, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16738197425 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74506384087 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585836909871 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7964808854 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1851851852 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2592592593 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178461086985 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471593997671 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574405822603 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109263881941 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568930317796 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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