Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
In the modern era, with the development of human’s modern society, more and more people tend to architectonics and constructing attractive buildings. In fact, human per se likes luxury and art so it is natural that individuals make effort to living in a beautiful building either traditional or modern. Although some people would rather live in a traditional house, I prefer to reside in a modern apartment building because of its safety and facilities.
First and foremost, feeling safe in a building is remarkable benefit of living in an apartment. It is crystal-clear that in an apartment building, there are many people who live in own apartment separately. Moreover, almost apartment buildings have a watchman. Therefore living in these building can keep you safe, so after a hectic day, you can go sleep without any stress and relax. To illustrate, last year I was a student in countryside so I had to rent a house alone. It was really awful for me, because every night I heard a lot of noise of yard and gusted that there was a thief in my house, so I could not concentrate in my studying and also could not pass my exam. As a result, living in an apartment maintains you safe.
Moreover, having new facilities and feeling convenient can be considered another advantage of living in a new apartment. It goes without saying that nowadays people prefer to live in a place that can make use of a wide range of amenities. As a matter of fact, in today’s societies, you should work hard as well as have hectic schedules for making progress, so you should save your times for doing essential activities. Hence, purchasing some materials such as dairy products from markets wastes your time and fortunately, nowadays, in almost apartment buildings there are many markets. In addition other facilities such as pools and gyms are constructed in an apartment block can help you not only enjoy your free time in your apartment but also save your time. As a consequence, what have encouraged people to live in a modern apartment is more convenient and better facilities.
In a nutshell, according to the above-mentioned points and details, living in an apartment has several advantages. In fact, it is anticipated that resident in a modern apartment more and more will increase in the modern societies. Can you remain safe in a big traditional? Do you have new facilities in an old building? I absolutely believe no!
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Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...st apartment buildings have a watchman. Therefore living in these building can keep you s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...nt buildings there are many markets. In addition other facilities such as pools and gyms...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223175965665 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.137339055794 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107296137339 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515021459227 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0622317596567 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139484978541 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0343347639485 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96736544704 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.0309702414327 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793991416309 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0257510729614 0.0209618222197 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00643776824034 0.0139019557991 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2424.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 413.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86924939467 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353510895884 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239709443099 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203389830508 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169491525424 0.112833075102 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96736544704 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503631961259 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.8536766684 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3167459222 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.6376109766 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.5811965812 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476114711567 0.300154397459 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0996855092419 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676797985011 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481011354754 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148953038364 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175022787733 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090357942865 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398826311233 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0345124869262 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350017270872 0.210909579961 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491848842995 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...st apartment buildings have a watchman. Therefore living in these building can keep you s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...nt buildings there are many markets. In addition other facilities such as pools and gyms...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223175965665 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.137339055794 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107296137339 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515021459227 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0622317596567 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139484978541 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0343347639485 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96736544704 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.0309702414327 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793991416309 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0257510729614 0.0209618222197 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00643776824034 0.0139019557991 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2424.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 413.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86924939467 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353510895884 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239709443099 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203389830508 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169491525424 0.112833075102 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96736544704 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503631961259 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.8536766684 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3167459222 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.6376109766 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.5811965812 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476114711567 0.300154397459 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0996855092419 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676797985011 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481011354754 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148953038364 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175022787733 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090357942865 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398826311233 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0345124869262 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350017270872 0.210909579961 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491848842995 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.