You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
Everyone has different perspectives on owning a house or a business when they have enough money. Some prefer to buy a house as an investment while others like to develop their own business. In my opinion, I prefer to get a house when I have enough fortunate.
First of all, I am extremely a very poor person and buying a house allow me to earn money with little risk. For example, My friend, Eric, he bought a new house in Taipei for one hundred thousand dollars, and he rented his house to the business owner quickly. As a result, he got one thousand dollars each month and made a fortune with a stable income flow because of rent. On the other hand, if he chose to invest his money in business without any hesitation, he might end up burning all his saving miserly out because of the risk of operating a company. Apparently, buying a house can make me a fortune.
Second, I am a quite lazy person. If I had enough money to buy a house, I can choose a place nearest to my company, and I can save a lot of effort in going to work. Take my dad for example. Before he bought a new house, he had to spend an hour driving to work. Two months ago, he bought a new home near his office, and he spends ten minutes walking to his company. That is to say, he saves tremendously a lot of effort on commuting. On the other hand, if my father chose to put his money into a business, he had to wake up every morning to take care of his business, and he might end up spending three hours on traveling to his new business. Thus, getting a house can save me a lot of effort in traveling.
Last but not least, I put emphasis strongly on my family, and buying a house allows me to have more time with my family. Take my friend, Lily, for example. When she did not have a house, her family member did not want to come home because they felt no sense of belonging. At that time, when Lily finished her work and came home, all the rooms were empty, and she felt lonely. However, after she lived a house she bought two months ago, every time she came home, she could always see his children in their room. It was because her children felt they had their own room, and they wanted to spend more time on decorating their room happily. That is to say, Lily had more time to spend with their children around at home. On the other hand, if she chose to spare her money on a company, she would have no time to play with her children, and she had to work all day long for her business. As a result, buying a new house suits me better.
In conclusion, I strongly prefer to buy a house. After all, I am a poor, lazy, and family loving person, and buying a house allows me to have a life I want to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14559386973 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23330569358 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429118773946 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6119193625 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1481481481 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.51851851852 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137671135794 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475483078836 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046867075521 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101842290466 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460512210027 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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