All different facets of an investment should be taken into account when you are spending a large amount of money. I prefer buying a house rather than purchasing a business since owning a business has a lot of risks and also requires a lot of effort to maintain.
In my point of view, managing a business properly requires a huge amount of knowledge, skill and experience. If I want to run my business, I’d also need to spend a lot of time for it. In other hand, owning a house or a property doesn’t include these challenges. For instance, my uncle always invests his money in buying a house then rents it and earns money again from his investment. I believe that he might be able to earn more money whether he buys a franchise, starts a new business or something like that, but he is not encountering any stress or issues which he might endure by possessing a business.
I think maintaining a house in a good condition is much easier than keeping a business in a lucrative state. My brother started a business with his friend two years ago. They bought an already existing business from its owner and they have put a lot of effort since then to make it more profitable. As I observe they are having a very hectic and busy life. They don’t have enough time to enjoy being with their families or relax on weekends. Although, they always say that the first years for a new business are the most important and challenging period of time, I think they wouldn’t have a simple life as before anymore.
In conclusion, as far as I’m concerned, buying a business is a risky and demanding endeavor which takes a lot of effort, whereas investing money in real estate such as purchasing a house is a more secure and less challenging option. So, if I have enough money, I would definitely choose to buy a house instead of getting myself in trouble by buying a business.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 68
- Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... are the most important and challenging period of time, I think they wouldn't have a simp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58702064897 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70158502006 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0822426552 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206393309837 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700397069772 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764981292181 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143791979749 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841847456701 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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