All different facets of an investment should be taken into account when you are spending a large amount of money. I prefer buying a house rather than purchasing a business since owning a business has a lot of risks and also requires a lot of effort to maintain.
In my point of view, managing a business properly requires a huge amount of knowledge, skill and experience. If I want to run my business, I’d also need to spend a lot of time for it. In other hand, owning a house or a property doesn’t include these challenges. For instance, my uncle always invests his money in buying a house then rents it and earns money again from his investment. I believe that he might be able to earn more money whether he buys a franchise, starts a new business or something like that, but he is not encountering any stress or issues which he might endure by possessing a business.
I think maintaining a house in a good condition is much easier than keeping a business in a lucrative state. My brother started a business with his friend two years ago. They bought an already existing business from its owner and they have put a lot of effort since then to make it more profitable. As I observe they are having a very hectic and busy life. They don’t have enough time to enjoy being with their families or relax on weekends. Although, they always say that the first years for a new business are the most important and challenging period of time, I think they wouldn’t have a simple life as before anymore.
In conclusion, as far as I’m concerned, buying a business is a risky and demanding endeavor which takes a lot of effort, whereas investing money in real estate such as purchasing a house is a more secure and less challenging option. So, if I have enough money, I would definitely choose to buy a house instead of getting myself in trouble by buying a business.
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wait until the class or meeting is o 70
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task 66
- TPO 46 Integrated writing task 88
- You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. 76
- TOEFL T P O 46 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... are the most important and challenging period of time, I think they wouldn't have a simp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58702064897 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70158502006 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0822426552 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206393309837 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700397069772 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764981292181 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143791979749 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841847456701 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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