You must prepare a final project. Which style would you prefer:
a) giving a class presentation
b)design a poster
c) write an essay
Whenever I had a choice how to present my work to someone I always choose giving a clearly made presentation, even at my classes or at my workplace. Hence, in this question I would definitely choose giving a class presentation because it has a lot of advantages and is easier choice for me. I have three reason why I chose preparing presentation for class.
First of all, comparing to an essay, presentation gives specific, academic information in less time with efficiently by saving readers time. Also, in my opinion, people tend to understand things easily when things explained by someone else because during explanation listeners can ask questions that brought doubt for them and found their answer in short period. For example, in my academic year, I usually got B's in most essay but when I give a presentation I usually get A's because I express my idea better in presentation and audience understand well in this way.
Secondly, to deliver sufficient information, preparing the poster is not good idea for me. However, poster could give the most crucial information, some ideas would excluded due to limited space or may be some ideas might require oral explanation. Hence, to deliver clear thought and understanding about work presenting is always good idea for me.
Last but not least, besides introducing the final project to class, presenting improves my skill of expressing idea in public which is one of the essential skill in future that individual should have. Especially, nowadays, the most companies looking for a person who can express their idea fully in front of public or co-workers so that he or she will be evaluated.
In conclusion, introducing final work by giving presentation is beneficial for both presenter and audience. Therefore, If I were given this choice, I will always choose to preparing presentation because of its advantages.
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| 2020-05-13 | Lorenzo Pereira Weber | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to give'.
Suggestion: to give
...sent my work to someone I always choose giving a clearly made presentation, even at my...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to give'.
Suggestion: to give
...this question I would definitely choose giving a class presentation because it has a l...
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Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to prepare'.
Suggestion: to prepare
...for me. I have three reason why I chose preparing presentation for class. First of all, ...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'exclude'
Suggestion: exclude
...t crucial information, some ideas would excluded due to limited space or may be some ide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06493506494 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9605262714 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2301151182 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114663331849 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483990550747 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340076369193 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672838671862 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195902888782 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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