You must prepare a final project. Which style would you prefer: a) giving a class presentation b) design a poster c) write an essay.
No one can deny that are both negative and positive aspects of giving a call presentation, designing a poster, and writing an essay. If I had to choose, I would choose design a poster to my final project, and I would do that for a number of reasons, I will explain and develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, I enjoy so much to edit, and create new things with a computer, a have made a lot online courses to help me express my ideas throw a computer project. For example, when I was younger, in one year I made 3 online courses and 2 classroom ones. With this experience in the computer part, for me, the best ways to express myself and my ideas will be throw a poster design.
Secondly, I`m bad writing essays since ever, I always have doubt in what to write and how to write my ideas. One example of this, is when I was sixteen years old, and my literature class, always ask us to write about our week, in one paragraph, I always have doubt and got the worst grades of the class.
Finally, giving a class presentation would be the worst to me, I`m really shy and quiet, and If I had to give a class to another students or even to my professor, I think everyone would laugh of my face. I already go to the therapy, to see why I am like this, I started to take some remedies, but nothing worked to me, nowadays, I have few friends, but I really love them, because they respect me.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that designing a poster would be the best option to me, I would express myself and my thoughts the best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27906976744 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42755999681 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6283138076 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212733901503 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889473453142 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683359862448 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124367848276 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740648778156 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.14 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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