Young people enjoy life more
Some people may argue that older people enjoy life more in comparison to young people. But I don't agree with them and think that young people enojoy life more than older people do. I think in this way because of three reasons.
First, younger people enjoy life more because they have less responsibilities compared to older people. For example, a young student usually thinks about his/her class assignments, what to eat at the cafeteria, how would he/she pay the bills next month. But this student's parents think about their jobs, how would they pay for themselves, how their childs are doing in the life, and how childrens' bills would be paid, etc. These extra responsibilities are carried by parents and non-parent older adults. It limits their opportunity to enjoy life.
Second reason I think younger people enjoy life more is that they have less physical constraints. An example can be that young people may enjoy various delicious foods that are highly salty or contains high amount of fat. But an older person usually thinks before choosing a food. We must agree that a regular enjoyable moment comes to our life with dining in the resturants or preaparing rich foods at home. This reason can be attributed to traveling, hanging out, and participating sports too. Most of these enjoyable activities are frequently done by young people, but missed by older people.
Third, older people are more matured and always aware of consequences. It makes them to think about future before making almost every decision and puts some stress on the person. If an old person is planning a vacation to the sea, he would consider about the costs, convinience, risks of commuting to the area, how the other persons who are staying at the home would be taken care of, who would water the lawn if everyone is away, and how would he get prepared for the upcoming workday after vacation, etc. But at the same time, his son would only think about how can this vacation made enjoyable. This extra stress on older people also limits their options to enjoy the same activity.
Because of the above reasons, I think older people enjoy life less than the young people do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85135135135 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38428167871 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505405405405 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0410873884 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419392924655 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16399363252 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17534888228 0.0737576698707 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329208803365 0.150856017488 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161011303863 0.0645574589148 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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