Young people enjoy life more than old people do.
The speaker asserts that younger generations enjoy life more than older people.I agree with the speaker as younger people have better
exposure to innovations and recent trends compared to older people. However I believe older generations enjoy a life with satisfaction and
peace compared to their descendants.
I agree with the speaker for several reasons.Firstly, newer generations are live in a world where innovations happen frequently and new things are
introduced everyday.For example, Internet has revolutionized the world by its enormous data resources.Young people are using internet for various purposes
compared to older people simply because our ancestors had very little or no knowledge about internet.The beauty of internet is that information can be accessed at anytime
from any part of the world.Nowadays, people use internet even to book groceries which was bought from shops earlier.Younger generations want to lead a life of luxury and hence use cutting edge
technologies to the maximum possible extents.
Secondly, younger generations are better educated compared to older people since the number of schools and colleges have increased exponentially.
Better literacy rate indicates better jobs and better jobs suggests high pay.For example, my grandfather was able to study only till fifth standard and hence chose
agriculture to be his 'bread and butter'. But, my father completed his masters from prestigious IIT, Delhi and landed in a job with high pay.
My father is enjoying his life lavishly compared to my grandfather. I have heard many stories similar to my example.
Young people earn more money compared to their predecessors and hence lead a luxurious life.
Although, younger generations may enjoy life comparatively, older generations tend to lead a peaceful and stress-free life.
Since, organisations pay more for today's generation, it is the duty of employees to work hard and satisfy the needs of the employer.
This leads to high stress and lack of peace among young generations.I read a newspaper article which stated that younger generations are more prone to more
stress compared to older ones. Even though there are advances in medicine the average life expectancy has reduced.
In conclusion,I agree that younger people tend to enjoy life better compared to older ones because of the scientific inventions and more literacy rate.
However, older generations enjoy stressfree and pious life in comparison to their successors.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282238442822 0.229887763892 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.16301703163 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.136253041363 0.0866891130778 157% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0486618004866 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.043795620438 0.0685040099705 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0948905109489 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0486618004866 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.01895912467 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0510948905109 0.0309702414327 165% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0535279805353 0.0887237588012 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00486618004866 0.0209618222197 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00729927007299 0.0139019557991 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2485.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 382.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.50523560209 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392670157068 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30890052356 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232984293194 0.174417080927 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141361256545 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01895912467 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53664921466 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.7155214254 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4666666667 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 154.832325077 48.84282405 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 120.699889404 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4666666667 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.5376344086 419% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 17.0 5.54480286738 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.3567190227 45.7405998639 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.45489161554 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197149505256 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125660453599 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684223091106 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.880609827493 0.497263757937 177% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180187210624 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09446716946 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884344254713 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.135382253075 0.336927656856 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0568465419084 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852612603472 0.210909579961 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863932406021 0.0618886996521 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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