Young people enjoy life more than older people
I agree with the above statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. I support this statement before of the following reasons. I am a Physical Therapist and so I know that older people tend to face health problems more than young people do. Sometimes older people even get joint pains and weakness due to arthrits. This in turn decreases their ability to socialize, travel and it even becomes difficult for them to continue with their hobbies. Older people may also suffer from heart, lung or blood pressure problems that also limits their mobility. They also may have prescribed medications that they need to take on timely basis. Health and fitness of a person plays a major role in their ability to enjoy life. As young people tend to have less health problems so they have an increased ability to enjoy life as compared to the older people.
Another reason that I believe that young people enjoy life more is that they having more energy and less experience of life tend to be more curious about life than older people. Older people are more experienced and may have been exposed to different life enjoyments more than the young people. So, they may not as enthusiastic as the young people to enjoy them as they have already experienced those things. On the other hand, young people being driven by their curiosity are more inclined to explore various enjoyments that life has to offer.
Further, I think that young people have big dreams that they want to achieve in their lifetime. Young people tend to be driven more by their dreams while the older people may be more realistic and develop a practical approach towards life. Older people may be inclined to objectify a situation or experience and compare it to their past experience. On the other hand, for a young person everything is new and s/he may have various subjective feelings towards the experience and may want to share their experience more with others. Young people may want to live their dream while older people may have already fulfilled most of their dreams.
Also, the energy levels of young people are much higher than older people. Young people can do more activities without fatigue as compared to older people. Loss of energy makes a person less interested in activities that they may have otherwise done if they had more energy. Furthermore, older people have their families and responsibiities that they may still need to take care of while young people may still be single and free to move around and do things of their choice. Young people also sometimes may get financial support from their parents while older people may have to take care of their finances themselves. As people get older they tend to work less and depend more on their savings. The financial reasons may limit their activities that they would like to do. On the other hand, young people may not have as much financial limitations and so are able to enjoy life more.
Thus, because of the above reasons I think that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n or experience and compare it to their past experience. On the other hand, for a young person ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, while, as to, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2516.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29031236193 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.368121442125 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6797616926 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1851851852 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5185185185 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14814814815 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.600522889959 0.236089414692 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261473804407 0.076458572812 342% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199188042115 0.0737576698707 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.514391058566 0.150856017488 341% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127159278627 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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