Modern education based on learning a content in depth . Curriculum is based on facts and application of facts in real environment based on ideas and concept. Facts are very important for any curriculumto understand the structure ,
When I were in school that time teachers gave me a homework based on facts . Those facts were boring to cram at home and repeat again in class. Lessons were boring and time consuming without focussing on facts and idea. Facts were not sufficient without concept and idea. Sometimes History subject based on facts , some students likes history , some weren't.
Math also based on facts and formula , english also based on rules and grammar. Student who likes methodical approach likes facts and structure. It is based on student mind some likes fact based approach to learn their material. some likes ideas and concept before to start their material.
Secondly, When i were in professional course my whole curriculum based on concepts even my clinicals . The courses were very interesting with multimidea approach and whole idea of facts in using in your learning. If you have an idea about facts and concept you are more comfortable with your course and curriculum and not feeling any anxiety and psychologicaldilemmma. Ideas and concepts makes more easy learning . This gives you big picture and application of material in real world
In conculusion , I agree it is more important to understand ideas and concepts .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21276595745 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83508688009 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506382978723 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4727007712 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5625 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176854259341 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742081329765 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063528332458 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142310943245 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09473038796 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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