Old people certainly live and enjoy ocations in their life but they do not enjoy as much as younger people do. Younger people do have time, money and energy to live their life at fullest and enjoy every moment on the other hand older people lack energy. Hance, Younger people do enjoy more.
Younger people have energy to carry out advantures activities, they have time to go out and explore the world. Older people do have lot of things to take care of such as fulfilling the needs of their family members. I have seen my father working so much just to make over life better. He never goes on a trip to enjoy and rarely goes out for dinner. He is not able to enjoy his life because of family pressure But it is not the case with me, I am free to go out and enjoy with friends and explore the world.
Younger people are generally pysically fit, unlike older people. When young, we don't have to worry about the weather and food we consume because our body can absorb the changes more effectively than older people and hance younger people can enjoy more.
A myriad of reasons discussed above supports the argument that younger people do enjoy more.
- Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends 76
- Oftentimes the results of a particular action are not of consequence rather it is the way we go about the action that matters most 50
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Oftentimes the results of a particular action are not of consequence rather it is the way we go about the action that matters most 50
- Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth century Dutch painters However there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style and 80
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...it, unlike older people. When young, we dont have to worry about the weather and foo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48341232227 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02778259396 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1371060383 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462556329574 0.236089414692 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207516818497 0.076458572812 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140106771592 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307862706918 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112330548829 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 86.8835125448 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...it, unlike older people. When young, we dont have to worry about the weather and foo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48341232227 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02778259396 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1371060383 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462556329574 0.236089414692 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207516818497 0.076458572812 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140106771592 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307862706918 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112330548829 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 86.8835125448 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.