Enjoying is the best way to live our lives. Define who enjoy more could be really difficult because it depends on particular ways to see life. Besides, other factors such as country, economy and culture could influence more than just age. However, in my opinion younger people have more chances to enjoy life than older one.
First of all, young people tend to live the present without concerning about the future. The responsibilities associated to jobs, children, finances are not a priority for them, and this produces an ephemeral sensation of joy and relax. This is a difference with older people, that can be clearly observed if we note that laugh and happiness diminish from kids to adults. Youth is a full of energy, vigour and positivism stage of live, that allows people to think that they have the entire lifetime to reach their dreams and complete their planes. Older people, commonly with lesser energy an health, may have the feeling of an ended live, so less joy can be obtained from adventures and physical activities.
Nevertheless, that state of grace for young people could become a double-edged sword. A moment of intense joy cold be followed by sad consequences, like, for example: sexual diseases, accidents, drugs addiction or alcoholism. This experiences have been already lived by older people, so they associated happiness and joy to more durable and valuable things.
Interestingly, one crucial aspect for young people nowadays is technology dependence. Social networks, smart-phones and internet are the main sources of joy for them. The ability to connect with people around the world can bring new experiences, and the media content generated is highly attractive. This is impossible to delight for older people, who usually don’t understand technology benefits and consider it as the “devil”
To sum up, no matter the age, people will seek to be happy in their own way. But it’s a reality that younger people will have more opportunities during lifetime to enjoy the journey to happiness.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 90
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice. 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18072289157 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80499161065 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8962303513 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238017298756 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826655397249 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751963772342 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140294628754 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630080952988 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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