young people have no influence on important decision that determine the future of the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young adults are considered as the pillar since they are the thriving personalities of this present world. In the given scenario it is said that whether the youngsters contribute to the development of the community or not has always been a debatableone. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that we the younger generation can have positive impact on the advancement of the society as well as nation. I feel this way for several reasons which I nwill explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, people from this era are much more educated as compared to the older generation. To be more precie, they have the better understanding of the current state of the surrounding. Not only this, youngers are creative minded in nature which eventually lead them to come up with new ideas and plan. So, with their intellegence they can have positive impact on the crucial decision making be it social or development work. To cite an example, recently a young boy has been elected as a mayor in our community with the hope to change our city toward the betterment. Udoubtedly, he has been one of the inspiring and influencing model out there.
Next, in this digital world we can have access to sophisticated technology which aid in developing advance society. To be more clear, youngester have sharp mind and they have the idea for the proper utilization of it which won’t be the case in older people. For instance, computer, the use of electronic gadget is ubiquitous. With the help of it we can handle, monitor and execute any work throughout the world. In addition, this won’t be possible with amatuer people and . Thus, better acknowledgment of the various technology is acquired which older generation won’t have.
All things considered, since modern era youth are more intellegent and have the access to the latest techonolgy they have the highest possibility to pave the path of development of locality and nation as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on’t be possible with amatuer people and . Thus, better acknowledgment of the vari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93230769231 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86144367618 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8148835312 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2941176471 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139031154995 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434114880569 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282462553071 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847436037078 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246431081492 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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