Your are helping to select a leader for a student organization or a group. Do you think a person's honesty is the most important characteristic for being a leader?
In the modern era, a proper leader plays a vital role in the success of our life. In this regard, while some people are of the opinion that an honest leader is an essential feature in leaders, other individuals believe that is a more significant feature than the honestly. I, strangely, agree with the second group for two reasons, which are described in the following paragraphs.
First of all, knowledge is the best attribute of a leader because having good knowledge helps solve the problems of the group. In fact, having the ability and strong expertise leads to better decision making in critical situations. Also, a knowledgeable person can guide his or her members to perform better on various issues or problems. For example, I remember when I joined the sports group, my leader was honest but did not enough ability and expertise; therefore, he could not solve the problem our team. After a while, our team of sport failed in the league. Therefore, if he had good knowledge and skills, he could guide his team members to success.
Second, having the ability to manage and control the group is another feature of the leader. Indeed, the leader have to can control their members of the team and makes maintain arrangement in their group. For instance, when I was a high school student, we had a small group with our classmates that helped each other in our homework. Unfortunately but, our leader was lack this skill, and my classmates did not complete their tasks and only a few of my friends did their duty. Therefore, having proper management helps penalize members of the group that do not their tasks and become a legal group; moreover, honest leader do not have good management.
In conclusion, I believe that knowledge and management are better than an honest person. Knowledgeable individuals better help decision making in under problems crisis, and good management lead to control member of their group
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3237.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 652.0 407.700716846 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96472392638 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05314661074 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59834375094 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.246932515337 0.524837075471 47% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 977.4 618.680645161 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0078556282 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.419354839 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0322580645 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35483870968 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196732004449 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707112041775 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510839861723 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11912439704 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493943553276 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.