In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.
No one can deny that everyone has a different definition of success. Some measure it by their cognitive abilities, while others by putting a smile in someone’s face. However, If I were forced to choose, I would say that honesty is the most essential trait to secure success in life personally and professionally.
First and foremost, being trust-worthy would create, strength, and sustain our relationships with others which in turn, will help us to successfully maintain ties. Yes, since such a trait is the pillar of relationships. For instance, when I was a sophomore, I made friends with one of my colleagues, and we became inseparable like to peas in a pod. One day, we got into a fight because I asked her about a particular thing. Unfortunately, she lied to my face and tried to twist the truth; because I was not able to believe her anymore, eventually, I had cut ties with her. Hence, honesty is the most indispensable character to pave the way for us to become successful when it comes to private relationships.
In addition, possessing a moral compass would aid us in maintaining a stable healthy mind. Indeed, honesty is a vital factor to have inner peace. For example, I remember once, I lied to my professor about doing an assignment. To be honest, that night, I could not sleep because my conscious was eating me alive.; so, on the following day, I went to my professor’s office and admitted the truth. My teacher acknowledged my honesty and I learned my lesson that stretching the truth will only create an internal conflict. Consequently, saying the truth in every life aspect is key to self-peace and become personally satisfied.
Last but not least, saying the truth would enable us to flourish in our professional endeavors. In point of fact, our superiors in the workplace can trust more easily. To illustrate, my brother is a finical analyst, when he got his first job, he was not that efficient employee. But my brother got promoted after two years, the reason behind that is his integrity and accountability. For sure, due to my brother’s moral correctness, his boss was able to trust him and believe in his potentials. Therefore, if my brother had covered- up his mistakes, he would have not gotten promotion. Accordingly, uprightness is what will assist us to instill confidence in our superiors and co-workers which in turn, will assist us in thriving professionally and become occupationally successful.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that we all wish to make it in life, but the door for that is honesty. I believe this for virous reasons such as honesty is key to sustain our ties with others, maintain a peaceful life and thrive in our jobs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05079824144 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538126361656 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1259130988 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100006773491 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311413938978 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308356128574 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659395077583 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219743824902 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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