Your school has enough money to purchase either computer for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy- computers or books?
There are numerous equipment and facilities required by school to augment students’ learning environment in order to provide higher education. Therefore, if my school had sufficient amount of money to buy either computer for students or books for the library, it would be a good idea to offer computers to students. There are several reasons why this choice is better than buying books for the library as it can be used as a convenient portable learning device as well as further aiding students’ educational necessities.
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