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People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do – rather than doing things they should do.
Every single human being on this earth has duties that they must do as well as activities that they enjoy doing. As a result, one must balance these two in order to live successfully. However, in my opinion, people nowadays tend to spend too much time on doing things they are obliged to do rather enjoy some quality time on personal activities.
From the time we attend high school, we are obliged to sit in stiff chair for long hours five times a week. Although there are some who appreciate the value of gaining education, spending our precious youth in classrooms taught by old-fashioned teache...
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No. of Words: 527 350
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 527 350
No. of Characters: 2385 1500
No. of Different Words: 255 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.791 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.526 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.384 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.095 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.719 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5