People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do – rather than doing things they should do.

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People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do – rather than doing things they should do.

Every single human being on this earth has duties that they must do as well as activities that they enjoy doing. As a result, one must balance these two in order to live successfully. However, in my opinion, people nowadays tend to spend too much time on doing things they are obliged to do rather enjoy some quality time on personal activities.

From the time we attend high school, we are obliged to sit in stiff chair for long hours five times a week. Although there are some who appreciate the value of gaining education, spending our precious youth in classrooms taught by old-fashioned teache...

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