In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya will soon become extinct. Experts are considering three ways to address the decline of Torreya.
The first option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. Torreya used to be found in abundance in the northern part of Florida, which has a specific microclimate. A microclimate exists when weather conditions inside a relatively small area differ from the region of which that area is a part. Northern Florida’s microclimate is very favorable to Torreya’s growth. The microclimate is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region’s relatively dry, warm climate. Scientists have been working to plant Torreya seeds in the coolest, dampest areas of the microclimate.
The second option is to move Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its Florida microclimate. Torreya seeds and sapling have been successfully planted and grown in forests further north, where the temperature is significantly cooler. Some scientists believe that Torreya probably thrived in areas much further north in the distant past, so by relocating it now, in a process known as assisted migration, humans would simply be helping Torreya return to an environment that is more suited to its survival.
The third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers. Seeds and saplings can be moved from the wild and preserved in a closely monitored environment where it will be easier for scientists both to protect the species and conduct research on Torreya. This research can then be used to ensure the continued survival of the species.
The author and The lecturer talk about the extinction of the evergreen tree, torreya Taxifolia. The author says that if we don't take any initiative then it will get extinct. So he explained the three ways to preserve the trees. While the lecturer opposes the suggestion because she did not find it reasonable for few reason.
Firstly, The author in the passage says that to reestablish the tree in the same location where it was found thousands of years because torreya grow in a micro climate and suggested location fulfill that requirement. However, The professor deny the fact by saying that due to global warming, micro climate are badly affected, nowadays, and this will lead to extinction of the tree.
Secondly, According to the passage, the author suggests to relocate the tree to the different location with the same survival weather condition. But the professor refute by giving an example of black locust tress. she says when human tried to relocate the locust tree, it had caused the extinction of the other rare trees.This can also led to a unpredictable outcomes.
Lastly, The author suggests to preserve the torreya in the research centers. it will help the tree grow; the control monitoring, and favorable condition. In contrast, the professor claim that tress desire enlarge and diverse environment for survival which cannot be possible in the laboratory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: few reasons
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...mate and suggested location fulfill that requirement. However, The professor deny...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests relocating'.
Suggestion: suggests relocating
...y, According to the passage, the author suggests to relocate the tree to the different location with...
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... the extinction of the other rare trees.This can also led to a unpredictable outcome...
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...n of the other rare trees.This can also led to a unpredictable outcomes. Lastl...
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Suggestion: suggests preserving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 226.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14159292035 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6617021164 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4396546502 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121873366896 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477310639421 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472933222766 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750155812915 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167355145666 0.0443174109184 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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