Both texts deal with the question that whether or not the European silver coin as brought by a group of the European travelers, the Norse into the United States thousand years ago. The text clearly states that many facts prove that it wasn't brought by the Norse itself, but just attributed to them because of its origin. In the lecture, however, the professor gives proofs why it is, in fact, a genuine European coin.
The first contradicting fact is the extended distance from the Norse's Canadian settlement to the state of Maine. The coin has been found in the Native American site which is located in Maine. The place is unbelievably further away from eastern Canada as more than a thousand kilometers. In the lecture, it is said that Native American explores were prone to obtaining other local subjects for its abnormality while traveling across the states.
Regarding this reasonable fact, not only coin brought in but also there are actually a lot of goods that are brought in the dominant ones.
Another problem with the silver coin is that the no other coin has not been discovered in the Norse's inhabitant. No coins no ones. Therefore, the Norse brought none of the European coins with them into their Northern American settlements. But this problem could be explained by now. The Norse didn't have any lasting place at the time in that providing, they packed in all of the silver coins with them when coming back to their home.
The third aspect which let archaeologists wonder about the origins of the coin is the fact, that the coins were treated as a valuable jewelry by the ancients of Native American when the Norse introduced European coins instead of just one silver rounded substance. Because of its beauty and attractive appearance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... Both texts deal with the question that whether or not the European silver coin as brought by ...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...elers, the Norse into the United States thousand years ago. The text clearly states that...
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ly states that many facts prove that it wasnt brought by the Norse itself, but just a...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...merican site which is located in Maine. The place is unbelievably further away from...
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Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity while traveling across the states. Regarding this reasonable fact, not only...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...em could be explained by now. The Norse didnt have any lasting place at the time in t...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... time in that providing, they packed in all of the silver coins with them when coming back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, regarding, so, therefore, third, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85333333333 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46778353094 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6888594388 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332605082117 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107569997083 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790336647906 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177327512745 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496356610678 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.