The reading and the listening record are talking about the silver coins which they are native of Norse in Canada.
First and foremost, the writer said that the silver coins belong to the 11th-century history, and they are be known by the citizens of Maine state in the U.S, and these coins it is not American origin. An explorer from Norse transferred them to the U.S. and said that it is not a historical fake. And in the lecture said that right that the coins, not a historical fake because of lots of subjects come to the North of America from different countries.
Secondly, in the article, they explain the reasons why are these coins it is not a historical fake, and one of them was the distance between the Maine state and Norse was about lots of Kilometers. And the speaker told us why these Canadian come from their country to the U.S just to reach those coins.
Thirdly, the author said that the Canadian had found that those coins are useless while they maybe publish surrounding Europe. Furthermore, the lecturer said that the Canadian know the Americans are active so they will use them in Jewellery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... the 11th-century history, and they are be known by the citizens of Maine state in...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...by the citizens of Maine state in the U.S, and these coins it is not American ori...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...nadian come from their country to the U.S just to reach those coins. Thirdly,...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive so they will use them in Jewellery.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67171717172 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34957072756 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 419.366225166 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8247263352 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06452816374 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180248888833 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07933915742 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06849826649 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109704986595 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411188204218 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 63.6247240618 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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