The reading and the lecture are both about whether the silver coin is real historical evidence or not. According to history, silver coins were discovered in the state of Maine in America brought by Norse. The author of the reading feels that the coin is fake by the lecturer opposes this idea. She thinks the coin is a real historical coin.
First the readings says that the place where the coin discovered is located very far from other sites where Norse went. Furthermore, Norse people were living in Canada which is thousand of kilometers away from Maine. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. She is of the opinion that even if they were living in the place that far from the site where the silver coin was discovered, their main work and their occupations were explorers. So they can travel although a destination is far from the place where they were living.
Secondly, the writer suggests that no other coin was found among the things that Norse discovered. In the article, it is said that they should have brought more silver coin if Maine was the place where has silver coin. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning, that yes, there was only one silver coin. She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that they did not have permanent settlements, thus, they brought back all their valuable things including the coins. Furthermore they were interested in discovering objects and other objects were also found on the site.
Finally, the author posits that North America did not recognize the silver coin as money. They didn’t know if it was money so it is useless to bring. In contrast, the lecturer’s position is that North American did not use the silver coin as money. He notes that the silver coin was appealing to North American as a beauty item. For example, they use it as a necklace, or jewelry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ks the coin is a real historical coin. First the readings says that the place w...
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...e people were living in Canada which is thousand of kilometers away from Maine. The lect...
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...rom the place where they were living. Secondly, the writer suggests that no ot...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ir valuable things including the coins. Furthermore they were interested in discovering obj...
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...r objects were also found on the site. Finally, the author posits that North Am...
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...they use it as a necklace, or jewelry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7950310559 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38652422131 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481366459627 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0095260321 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2631578947 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255810526358 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960380207499 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814718040222 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17251690773 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536431206345 0.0443174109184 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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