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The lecture mainly contradicts the information given in the reading passage stating that the zoos are the essential one to the modern culture and provides adequate education, whereas the lecture says that the zoos are only good for entertainment rather than the education. There are various points discussed in the lecture to cast the doubts in the reading passage.
Firstly the speaker tells about the animal safety. The speaker says that the death of red panther arises a question about the safety, whereas the author has mentioned in the passage that the animals are treated well. The lecture says about the treatment is not pretty and as a result the panthers die and this has raised a question about the treatment mentioned in the reading passage, also this questions the responsibility of the care taker in the zoos.
Secondly, lecture says that the zoos gives the good entertainment rather than the education. The author has mentioned in the passage that the zoos provide education, but the speaker says that the visitors in the zoos are entertained by the artificial facts and the misleading exhibits.
Thirdly, the lecture says that the endangered species is problematic. Although the author given an example to state that the endangered species plays a vital function, the speaker tells that the zoos have no distinct advantage by saving endangered species.
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- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent's jobs than to choose jobs that very different from their parent's job. 70
- The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine."Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey 39
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were childrenUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
- tpo23 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast the doubts in the reading passage. Firstly the speaker tells about the anim...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ibility of the care taker in the zoos. Secondly, lecture says that the zoos giv...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial facts and the misleading exhibits. Thirdly, the lecture says that the endan...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266666666667 0.261695866417 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158904122519 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0541666666667 0.0723426182421 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0458333333333 0.0435111971325 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0277247811725 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.1375 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0541666666667 0.0370669169778 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63648105741 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0125 0.0208969081088 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.220833333333 0.128158765124 172% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1376.0 1645.83664459 84% => OK
No of words: 224.0 271.125827815 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14285714286 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383928571429 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316964285714 0.287516216867 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178571428571 0.187439937562 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.113142543107 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63648105741 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459821428571 0.539623497131 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.3403748888 53.8517498576 75% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8888888889 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9354072447 49.3711431718 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.888888889 132.220823453 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 0.878197800319 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 56.5853174603 50.5018328374 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.1568627451 1.90840788429 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.317086895645 0.142949733639 222% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.093328864463 0.0787303798458 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.841255649545 0.631733273073 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.100537536425 0.139662658121 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.651210139517 0.414875509568 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0833301581192 0.0530846634433 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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