about requiring companies to offer employees work 80% of the time for 80% of their salary will bring benefits for them
The text states that a mandatory policy, requiring all companies to offer their employees the right to work 4 out of 5 days of the week for 80% of their salary, should be passed; This could bring important benefits for companies, the economy, and employees. On the other hand, the professor opposes this view and explains that this policy could actually worsen the situation for all the involved.
First, the passage posits that this specific policy could translate to higher profits for companies. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that this policy would make companies increase their costs. These increased costs would result from more medical benefits, more trainings, more office space, and more computers needed for a larger number of workers.
Second, according to the text, this new policy would decrease unemployment rate. Again, the lecturer opposes this view by stating that hiring is costly, and thus companies are unlikely to hire more workers. In addition, he mentions that companies might start asking their employees for overtime and might start demanding more productivity out of the same number of workers.
Third, the text claims that implementing this new regulation would improve quality of life for those employees willing to work fewer hours. The professor counters this point by expressing that quality of life for employees could actually worsen. He mentions that these workers might lose job stability: companies might be more inclined to fire first these workers under an economic downturn, or even avoid giving promotions to them.
- At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- about requiring companies to offer employees work 80% of the time for 80% of their salary will bring benefits for them 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31474103586 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46013274821 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.863437968 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259794752646 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982856186149 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105370144481 0.0662205650399 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164603507331 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941908631981 0.0443174109184 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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