Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.
Nowadays, our life keep developing and changing with fulfill the need of human being. Modern life has become more and more popular all over the world. And internet is one of the most successful and popular systems that was first appeared in the early 1970s up to now.
Most of the users find the internet has enormous benefits. one of its benefits is the social networks where people can have such easy ways to communicate even when they are not together or in different countries such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, E-mail, ect. These help the users to find informations or watch news more convenient. Moreover, internet plays a huge role in people’s works, people’s lives, the industries … As a student, internet is very important to me. Besides having some social media accounts, I usually use it to help me with my study, I also use it to entertain like playing games, listening to music, watch movies, or read free stories which I don’t have to buy a book.
Everything has its two faces and so does the internet. This system has quite many disadvantages. there are some sites which have unsuitable contents for some ages especially the children, or even there are some links in some advertisements that lead to the blackmails. Although it has plenty of benefits, some of the users has used it too much that everything they do they always need the internet or we call “The slave of the internet”, they become insensitivity, afraid of the lights, and they don’t talk much or do any exercises.
In conclusion, I believe that the internet have an important effects to our life and there are also some negative sides. we have to use it in a positive way so that we get its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: One
...ind the internet has enormous benefits. one of its benefits is the social networks ...
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Suggestion: There
...is system has quite many disadvantages. there are some sites which have unsuitable co...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ls. Although it has plenty of benefits, some of the users has used it too much that everyth...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...eve that the internet have an important effects to our life and there are also some neg...
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Suggestion: We
...and there are also some negative sides. we have to use it in a positive way so tha...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... some negative sides. we have to use it in a positive way so that we get its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80471380471 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78550298091 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0650750929 49.2860985944 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119225925487 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476188468793 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570230534485 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725397736126 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162933870498 0.0443174109184 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.