Although it’s a new technology, solar energy provides benefits to the entire world. First, solar energy eliminates our reliance on non-renewable fossil fuels. Additionally, solar energy is non-pollutant, which makes it better for everyone. Finally, there is almost no maintenance as solar panels have a long life span without regular maintenance. So, the benefits seem to be overwhelmingly positive and supportive of further production.
The first benefit is the ability for solar energy to reduce reliance on fossil fuels. Many sources of energy are renewable only over millions of years. Unfortunately, humans consume those faster than they are produced. Solar energy could be a replacement for non-renewable sources as a perpetual source of energy. Thus solar energy can become a new energy with no legitimate fear of overproduction.
Another benefit is the non-pollutant aspect of solar energy. Burning fossil fuels is known to produce deadly pollution, while solar energy produces zero harmful byproducts. While current energy sources produce disgusting smells, sounds, and visuals, solar energy produces nothing offensive. Therefore, when considering the health of the planet, the lifelong health benefits of solar energy are unparalleled.
Finally, solar energy has low costs. The cost of solar panels is a one-time purchase. Also, after installation, the lifespan of a solar panel is thirty years. After the initial cost, the solar panel will cost almost nothing. This is a benefit to personal finances, but also peace of mind since there is no worry about rising prices or lack of resources.
In conclusion, these benefits provide support for more people to consider switching to solar power. Both the renewable aspect as well as the non-polluting aspect means that there will be added benefits for individuals, cities, and the planet. The low lifelong cost of installation and maintenance provides a lifetime of benefits. Thus, solar energy looks to be one of the world’s great ideas.
The reading and the audio are both about solar energy. The passage states that this new energy provides benefits to all the world. The lecturer builds upon those same ideas to give a more comprehensive picture with three example.
First of all, according to the text, this power get from the sun's ability has to reduce reliance on fossil fuels. Solar energy can be a great replacement to those non-renewable resources. supporting this idea the lecturer explains that solar energy is a clean renewable source of energy. Furthermore, he points out an the the sun in five years will give the earth enough energy that it was used to make.
Secondly, the reading states that another benefit is non-pollutant aspect of solar energy since burning fossil produces a highly pollution, while solar energy produces zero harmful byproducts. The lecturer then goes on to explain that solar energy is a multi fussed use due to people can control this energy how they want. In addition, he points out that people don't have to be unwaited money.
Finally, the text claims that solar energy has low costs since people only have to buy solar panels which is a one time purchased. In supporting this idea, the lecturer brings up the point that this energy has a low-maintenance hence people won't spend much money on panels maintenance.
In conclusion, although the reading and the audio both discuss solar energy, the three main points are effectively supported by the lecturer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suns'' or 'sun's'?
Suggestion: suns'; sun's
...ng to the text, this power get from the suns ability has to reduce reliance on foss...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Supporting
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e of energy. Furthermore, he points out an the the sun in five years will give the...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
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Suggestion: the
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Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('pollution') instead of another adjective.
...ar energy since burning fossil produces a highly pollution, while solar energy produces zero harmf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9837398374 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54102436272 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.213441613 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06452816374 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370961356609 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13720766996 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978058207761 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201786933271 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787858270999 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.