The author states about the reasons that show that the teenage girl in the portrait did belong to Jane Austen. As opposed to, the lecturer who counter-argues that viewpoint trying to prove that these three reasons do not seem convincing.
First and foremost, the writer mentions that when Austen died her family gave the permission to use the portrait as an illustration in an edition of her letters. On the contrary, the professor cannot disagree more, reasoning that in that portrait is not Austen because she was elder than 17 years when she died. Apart from that, the girl in the portrait does not correspond with the age of the Austen.
The second argument the author gives is that the face in the portrait clearly resembles the Cassandra's sketch, which communicate definite details about Austen's face. However, the lecturer cannot be more outraged, explaining that the Austen's family was a big family the possibility of given one of the portraits of her cousins is high. Actually, the family could have given her nice portrait instead.
Lastly, on one hand, the passage points out that the painter who painted the portrait was linked with Ozias style. Even though, the signature was missing. The family would hire one of the most famous painter. Nevertheless, the professor declaring that only because was his style it does not prove that is painted by him. Additionally, the seller of the portrait start selling when Austen was 27 years old at that time. So, the timing did not correspond with the age of the girl in the picture.
The author states about the reasons that show that the teenage girl in the portrait did belong to Jane Austen. As opposed to, the lecturer who counter-argues that viewpoint trying to prove that these three reasons do not seem convincing.
First and foremost, the writer mentions that when Austen died her family gave the permission to use the portrait as an illustration in an edition of her letters. On the contrary, the professor cannot disagree more, reasoning that in that portrait is not Austen because she was elder than 17 years when she died. Apart from that, the girl in the portrait does not correspond with the age of the Austen.
The second argument the author gives is that the face in the portrait clearly resembles the Cassandra's sketch, which communicate definite details about Austen's face. However, the lecturer cannot be more outraged, explaining that the Austen's family was a big family the possibility of given one of the portraits of her cousins is high. Actually, the family could have given her nice portrait instead.
Lastly, on one hand, the passage points out that the painter who painted the portrait was linked with Ozias style. Even though, the signature was missing. The family would hire one of the most famous painter. Nevertheless, the professor declaring that only because was his style it does not prove that is painted by him. Additionally, the seller of the portrait start selling when Austen was 27 years old at that time. So, the timing did not correspond with the age of the girl in the picture.
- TPO-29 integrated writing task 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- The lecturer and the reading passage give contradictory opinions on the topic of the policy which is called "let it burn", this policy its been common practice in the United States since the late 1980's. The passage explains that the fires would burn them 70
- Do you agree with the statement that teachers have had more value in the past than today 73
- Agree/ Disagree The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that show that the teenage girl in the portrait did belong to Jane Austen. As o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, lastly, nevertheless, second, so, apart from, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93129770992 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48237185706 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5948750158 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370854330321 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128928131471 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189937447952 0.0662205650399 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310482466994 0.162205337803 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.36290362701 0.0443174109184 819% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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