According to the reading passage, it is stated that since the growth of the broccoli is restricted to the cooler regions, scientists are trying to create a new type of it that can be grown on the regions despite their hotter summers. The article provides some benefits of this action. However, the lecturer refutes the assumptions made in the reading passage and presents three solid reasons to challenge them.
Firstly, the reading claims that as the transportation costs of the locally produced broccoli decreases, broccoli costs for consumers fall. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that this approach will not necessarily make the broccoli cheaper. She states the new created broccoli would have lower yields than the traditional one, and its production rate is less, which in turn, requires to be sold more pricely.
Secondly, the article posits that because the new type of broccoli is being produced by traditional breeding ways, unlike the public belief it will probably be more desirable and more safe. In contrast, the professor says that whatever it be, public still might be suspicious of it. According to her, since the financial aid of this program comes from the same companies that use genetic modifications, people may distrust this approach.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...three solid reasons to challenge them. Firstly, the reading claims that as the ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urn, requires to be sold more pricely. Secondly, the article posits that becaus...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...st, the professor says that whatever it be, public still might be suspicious of it...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14423076923 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61720454214 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.747985425 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.888888889 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225349817231 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082328018003 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587159493104 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148248085875 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314823488848 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...three solid reasons to challenge them. Firstly, the reading claims that as the ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urn, requires to be sold more pricely. Secondly, the article posits that becaus...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...st, the professor says that whatever it be, public still might be suspicious of it...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14423076923 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61720454214 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.747985425 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.888888889 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225349817231 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082328018003 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587159493104 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148248085875 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314823488848 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.