Describing the ways in which elephants fascinate humans - TPO51
While the reading passage gives several beliefs about elephant behavior, the professor in the lecture says that, these beliefs are missundrestanding, and she puts some reasons.
First, considering the reading passage, when elephants become old, they leave the herd and died alone. In contrast, the professor in the lecture rejects this idea, and she further explains that, when they become old enough, they leave the herd to look vegetation. actually, most vegetation is near the water, so they go near the water and died there that it called elephant graveyards.
Second, the reading passage states that, elephants have artistic ability and can hold a paintbrush. On the contrary, the professor in the lecture refuses this idea, and she makes point that, elephants have sensitive ears. actually, they can use their ears to paint and remember painting
Third, the reading passage states that, elephants have a fear of mice. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture says that, if elephants are not familiar with mice, they will afraid of mice. she explains that, mice and elephants that live in the zoo are familiar with each other, and in this case, elephants do not away from the mice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Actually
...they leave the herd to look vegetation. actually, most vegetation is near the water, so ...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Actually
...nt that, elephants have sensitive ears. actually, they can use their ears to paint and r...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir ears to paint and remember painting Third, the reading passage states that, ...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ar with mice, they will afraid of mice. she explains that, mice and elephants that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, second, so, third, while, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47712213424 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.935097428 49.2860985944 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927356827086 0.272083759551 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492121336064 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216089517075 0.0662205650399 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598878702406 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188543465212 0.0443174109184 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 63.6247240618 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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