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Disabled people
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdC3mCe3qcM&feature=youtu.be
The subject of the reading passage are disabled people and some misconceptions that people hold in regard to this group of individuals. Furthermore, the lecture's main purpose is to clarify each one of them: disabled people are not equivalent to sick people, they actually enjoy a good quality of life and they do not want to inspire others as being special, but just normal.
First, the passage states that people deem every disabled person as being sick -he or she must suffer from some mental or physical ailments-, which the professor gainsays because there are different degrees of disability,...
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 282 250
No. of Characters: 1443 1200
No. of Different Words: 150 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.117 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.642 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.145 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.167 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4