Do science world has exact results possible effect of Global warming?
In this set of materials, the author and the professor are discussing the impacts of global warming over the earth and human life. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer argues that is not evidence between the industrial CO2 and human interaction others maintain that global warming increases possible results of the industrial world. İt poses some reasons; it maybe increase 10 Celsius Degree that affect atmosphere many bad ways. The professor invalidates the author assertions; in some aspects and demonstrates that over the past century global temperature increased more than 1 degree and it affected people life. The details of the professor’s refutation are revealed in the following paragraphs respectively.
Firstly, author states many scientists believe that it is not exact evidence regarding to global warming from human activity. This has very limited responsibility that is no historical evidence. In the past century, science people has not enough materials to examine the world surface and atmosphere, so science world has not qualified data from the past years. Greenhouse or CO2 is find the world atmosphere that required to human and surface life. But, too CO2 gas have undeniable effects that increase surface temperature and sea degree. People and animals get used to not easily new global temperature so that maintain their life which sort of kinds face to face possible destruction.
Secondly, historical data may offer no conclusive results. Because world lived ice age in the past during many years; people can say that there is ver low people population and no industrial. So greenhouse always find in atmosphere. Although CO2 is necessary for living life, too greenhouse has possible bad results. Because people use too much fossil fuels for industrial production,thus the CO2 level dramatically increase day by day. Scientist has predicted that global temperature will increase 10 degree in the next century. Moreover, climate change maybe faster than we estimated.
Tos um up, science world has two different idea about global warming. But there is an conclusive result which climate will change. The Earth life may face potential extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40579710145 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81917996541 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544927536232 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1353529381 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8095238095 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2460361339 0.272083759551 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592018496621 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632922252819 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151088801167 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635704607783 0.0443174109184 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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