Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
history sounds normally boring to the students that do not study any subjects relating to it. The question would be asked is that " is it a good idea to plan history as a main subject for all the courses, even though they do not take it as their main field. In my opinion, it is an unneccessary addition. I strongly disagree with it.
Let me account for my decision. first of all history is already included in every first word of any subject. For example, at the beginning of chemistry, the students will be taught about Rutherford, who had discovered the gold atom. The second reason which strengthens my statement are students' will and joy. Just imagine that how a free one would feel if he is forced to do what he does not like it. With an excellent student he would have tried hard to accomplish the good scores. Contrarily, an average student would consider history as well misery struggle in his student-life. According to a statistic of the national Education Council of Vietnam, there are 70 percent of students could not say the name of a historical hero correctly. In another hand, some students they learn it because of their own interest in history. Then why we have to put history as an obligation applied for all the courses?
In summary, i would like to confirm my opinion that history should be counted as a freewilling subject, which students can choose to study with happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in summary, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6963562753 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.618823024 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591093117409 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5983031939 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232764606006 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073448611752 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466462201984 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170013322349 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221809973982 0.0443174109184 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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