Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good idea to move to a new city or a
new country because you will lose old friends.
it is widely accepted since the dawn of civilization in the contemporary word communication with other people has played a significant role in human life.
the controversial question which arises here is whether move to new city or country and losing old friend is a good idea. The answer depends on the lens through which one is looking and perceiving the word.
I, nonetheless contend that more meet people and place the more have friend. In the following paragraph, two conspicuous reason will cogently illustrate this perspective.
The first remarkable reason to be mentioned is that moving to new city or country does not induce lose old friend because now days with social media distance for communication is meaningless due to that fact we can keep in contact with our old friends. Additionally when you try don’t miss your friend even with long distance relationship or talk to them with some of application like skype or other social media you make strong friendship also this fact approve during the time. For instance the statistic revealed by a recently conducted research in the Masachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT) shown that people who move to new city or country and also keep contact with their old friend not only don’t lost them but also they are more supportive and have good friendship for long time.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that when you move to new city meet other people so we can make new friends also enhance our social skill. There is also the fact that our old friend has similar opinion with us in a lot of field making new friend help us going out of comfort zone. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. Years ago I moved to another city and make friend with the group of people which they went out of town every weekend to swim in lake or hiking but I never have gone place like this because my old friends and I believe out of town is dangerous for girls. Had I don’t move to new city, I would not have think out of the box in the future.
Finally, by taking all the mentioned points account of course are some arguing that the vast majority of people think move to new place and loss old friends not a good idea but, one will undoubtly draw the conclusion that move to new city and country is good idea and improve a lot of our ability. In fact, there are a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced owing to the dearth of time.
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- TPO 21 Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is widely accepted since the dawn of ci...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...yed a significant role in human life. the controversial question which arises her...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...ore meet people and place the more have friend. In the following paragraph, two conspi...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...n keep in contact with our old friends. Additionally when you try don’t miss your friend eve...
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Line 4, column 519, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recently conducted research'.
Suggestion: recently conducted research
... For instance the statistic revealed by a recently conducted research in the Masachusetts Institute of Techno...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of fields'.
Suggestion: a lot of fields
...d friend has similar opinion with us in a lot of field making new friend help us going out of ...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to go' or 'go'.
Suggestion: to go; go
... lot of field making new friend help us going out of comfort zone. my personal experi...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...iend help us going out of comfort zone. my personal experience is a compelling exa...
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Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[4]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...t of town is dangerous for girls. Had I don’t move to new city, I would not have th...
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Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...on’t move to new city, I would not have think out of the box in the future. Finally,...
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Line 6, column 319, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ot of our ability. In fact, there are a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, nonetheless, so, for instance, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 444.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62837837838 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50082670367 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 145.348785872 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484234234234 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 419.366225166 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3081928358 49.2860985944 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 21.698381199 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403954744888 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128846558086 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106750732137 0.0662205650399 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189283614448 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101306389684 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.0289183223 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.