It is cryptically clear that leader, who manage a group of people, is ana pivotal and inevitable part of not only our life but also almost every work in a daily basis group. Every group includes a team, who work on a project, a company, organization or even a country needs to be managed by someone. Without any manager who controls all of the process of reaching the group goal, successful will not come and they are liable to culminate with fail . Any society definitely has a leader who consults the people to execute desirable agendas. Besides, even when we are at school working on a group project, someone controls the budget and time of the project as a supervisor. Some people believe that these people are innately leaders. Whereas others believe that it is learnable to be a leader. Personally, I am in favor with the latter group for two legitimate reasons, which are detailed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, leader must have some special characteristics such as wisdom, decisive a manager or leader has some adorable characteristic which are completely obtainable not innate. Although all of people cannot learn these special characteristics but some people can learn them during their lifetime. Some of these features are visionary, innovative, and decisive on their decision, making the best decision in crucial situations, and so on. It is obvious that these kind of characteristics can be learned. These traits are not innate personalities, which are not learnable. As a case in point, when I was working at a computer company, which was very reputable, three months ago, we had a manager who was good at making a good and decisive decision. When you check out her resume, It shows that she has a repudiate studies in some majors. Besides, she worked as an internship in some other companies. Being successful on all of her projects shows that had a considerable studying, instructor and teachers. It goes without saying, a leader who want to manage a group of people must be well-educated and be able to intellect others people which will comes if they work hard to learn anything is needed.you can one of those characteristic as being sociable. Based on some research, it is not innate. In other words, if someone is shy and is not sociable, it does not mean they cannot change. These people can change into a sociable person. To be more tangible, when I was teaching at university as a lecturer, one of my students was such people. She even was afraid of contributing in class conversation. I recommend her some advice, which was useful for her to be more sociable. At the end of semester, she was so sociable that she liked to solve any example, which I ask them to solve on the board.
Moreover, the world has been changed in every basis. If leadership is naturally, so in the volatile problem of the world, how they can make good decision, which has a considerable impact on multitude of people. To take a good decision they need to learn about a string and dependent series of events. It goes without saying, making good decision is not an innate things in people personalities.
To sum up, I completely agree with the idea that leadership does not come naturally. Not only do leader have to have some learnable characteristic but also they have to make some decision, which needs to learn some other things. Every society should select someone who can make good decision in not only good condition but also bad situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...meone. Without any manager who controls all of the process of reaching the group goal, suc...
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Line 1, column 448, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d they are liable to culminate with fail . Any society definitely has a leader who...
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Line 1, column 735, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that these people are innately leaders. Whereas others believe that it is learnable to ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...tuations, and so on. It is obvious that these kind of characteristics can be learned. Thes...
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Line 2, column 807, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...k out her resume, It shows that she has a repudiate studies in some majors. Besides, she wo...
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Line 2, column 1208, Rule ID: PRP_MD_CD_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can use one' or 'can be one'?
Suggestion: can use one; can be one
...rk hard to learn anything is needed.you can one of those characteristic as being sociab...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
..., making good decision is not an innate things in people personalities. To sum up, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, kind of, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 10.4613686534 344% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 28.0 12.0772626932 232% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 22.412803532 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 30.3222958057 247% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2865.0 1373.03311258 209% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 598.0 270.72406181 221% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79096989967 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.04702891845 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80239791541 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 145.348785872 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439799331104 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 931.5 419.366225166 222% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 3.25607064018 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 13.0662251656 245% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5483619475 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.53125 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46875 7.06452816374 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137626420819 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372463004959 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469869902783 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862869285021 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290585505583 0.0443174109184 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 63.6247240618 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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