The reading and the lecture are both about the confusion related to dinosaurs being endotherms. The author of the reading states that dinosaurs are endotherms where as the lecturers suggests that they are not. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points made in the reading using three examples.
Preeminently, according to the reading, dinosaurs are endotherms because there fossils have being found in polar regions. The author pointed out that animals who could maintain a temperature well above the surroundings would be able to survive in such regions. However, the lecturer disputes this point. He claims that polar regions were warmer in dinosaur's times as compared to today. He also suggested that they might have migrated or hibernated when it was cold.
By the same token, the reading states that dinosaurs had legs underneath their body which helped them with physical activities like running and also strongly suggested that they were endotherms. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument. He asserts that this particular positioning of legs also helps to support more weight which would have being advantageous to the dinosaurs as they were large.
In winding up, the reading contends that dinosaurs had Haversian canal, which helped the living animal to grow quickly. This was a typical characteristics of endothermy. In contract, the lecturer's stance was that dinosaurs were also found to have growth rings which contributed to inconsistent growth or rapid growth in particular environmental conditions. Hence, nothing definite could be concluded.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ng states that dinosaurs are endotherms where as the lecturers suggests that they are no...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e lecturers suggests that they are not. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in the reading using three examples. Preeminently, according to the reading, ...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar regions. The author pointed out that animals who could maintain a temperature...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to the dinosaurs as they were large. In winding up, the reading contends that...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
...mal to grow quickly. This was a typical characteristics of endothermy. In contract, the lecture...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
...ristics of endothermy. In contract, the lecturers stance was that dinosaurs were also fou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, nevertheless, so, well, in particular, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47131147541 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78573686561 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561475409836 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1440431299 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131528834022 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424489663576 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039796639654 0.0662205650399 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806340059094 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397885528976 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ng states that dinosaurs are endotherms where as the lecturers suggests that they are no...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e lecturers suggests that they are not. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in the reading using three examples. Preeminently, according to the reading, ...
^^^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar regions. The author pointed out that animals who could maintain a temperature...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to the dinosaurs as they were large. In winding up, the reading contends that...
^^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
...mal to grow quickly. This was a typical characteristics of endothermy. In contract, the lecture...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
...ristics of endothermy. In contract, the lecturers stance was that dinosaurs were also fou...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, nevertheless, so, well, in particular, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47131147541 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78573686561 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561475409836 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1440431299 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131528834022 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424489663576 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039796639654 0.0662205650399 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806340059094 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397885528976 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.