: Food stores in each country should sell only local food products and food imported from other countries. Do you agree or disagree? State your viewpoint and state why you feel that way
There are several reasons for the countries which use local food. I feel that countries should concentrate on producing local food.
Firstly, I agree with food stores which should sell only local food because this means there are many people who live in the same country which by the local food can find a job and decrease the number of unemployed people. Therefore, this step attempts to encourage the native people to work well. The native people can rely on themselves. So, sometimes some countries try to depend on some other country products such as imported food since they know that in their countries will coast it more than getting it from other countries.
In addition, the economy will be improved by depending on local food. As you know, improving the products of the local country will be related to improving the economy as local food can produce looking like some of the global economies. There are many researchers indicate that the country which no deponed on its local food will be weak, but it is reflective if it relies on local food.
Furthermore, The country which concentrates on local food will enhance the investment since the quality of the local food will be good in the future. Each country wants to take the local food from other countries because they think that the local food in this country is good since it depends on itself. Thus, the region which has local food encourage an investor to Attract to buy it.
To sum up, the store's food should be only selling local food in order to improve and enhance the economy and to attract the investor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... as local food can produce looking like some of the global economies. There are many resear...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stores'' or 'store's'?
Suggestion: stores'; store's
...o Attract to buy it. To sum up, the stores food should be only selling local food ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, i feel, in addition, such as, you know, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80072463768 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32350922681 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471014492754 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.934926539 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413700664973 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182174055481 0.0996497079465 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961482611454 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279116035516 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224308995627 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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