The reading asserts that cloud seeding that is a method of reducing hail, which cause damages to farm crops, is an effective approach. The lecturer, however, finds the idea dubious and casts doubt on the reasons proposed by the reading passage.
First of all, the reading claims that some laboratory experiments lead us to the conclusion that adding silver iodide to cold water vapor is a feasible solution for making light snow instead of hail pellets. Conversely, the speaker brings up the idea that this result is limited to laboratory conditions, and in the real life, adding silver iodide may cause drought and hampers any precipitation from sky like snow, rain and hail. As a result, farmers will deal with another problem which is lack of water.
Furthermore, the author holds the view that this method is tested and lucrative in urban areas of Asia, so it is practical in United States too. In contrast, the professor underlines the fact that air pollution, which is common in urban areas, makes a favorable condition for cloud seeding; however, there is not any insurance that this method will be feasible in farming regions which are devoid of any pollution.
Finally, the reading passage states that some local studies are done in central regions of United states which supports the value of cloud seeding and shows a reduction of hail damage to farm crops in examined areas, compared to previous years. On the contrary, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that a reduction of farm crops damaging is observed in many areas of United States, in that year, not only in the probed area. Consequently, this decrease is a result of natural variation in local weather and has nothing to do with cloud seeding.
- TPO 34 Integrated Writing Task A huge marine mammal known as Steller s sea cow once lived in the waters around Bering Island off the coast of Siberia It was described in 1741 by Georg W Steller a naturalist who was among the first Europeans to see 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement After high school students should have at least one year to work or travel It s better than attending university straight away 78
- Some people think that older children should be required to take care of the younger children Others think that this should be done by parents or other adults Which do you prefer 78
- TPO 34 80
- TPO38 Integrated Task 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in contrast, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91496598639 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47423906437 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9348012223 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 110.228320801 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 21.698381199 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06452816374 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184400166218 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707121980245 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373551043519 0.0662205650399 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101363284441 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484460327801 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.3589403974 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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