If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? Why?
Most of people have a lot of places where they wish to come back for many reasons. Specifically, those places could b cities or countries where people grew up or had some memories such as holidays, travels, or jobs. In my case, if I were to choose one, I would like to come back to Italy. I made a PhD in Italy, and I have greats remembers when I was there, which I will develop in the following paragraphs.
First of all, friends are one of the most important things that anyone could have an anyplace. So, when people want to return to some place in most of cases it is because they left or miss some old friend. Drawing my own experience, I made a lot in Italy, and I love to see them again if it could be possible. Not only we spent time together, but also we studied at the same group of research.
Second, Italy has so many things to visit around such us cities, little towns, mountains, rivers, and endless places. Furthermore, I left in love when I went to Venezia. In my point of view, it is the best city in the word. Venezia has all that you want, restaurants, churches, and the best tour that you can do on gondolas. It is amazing go around the city through those little river allies.
Finally, Italy, although has a sharp climate in each season, I enjoyed every day. For example, there are some sky centers, and at the beginning of winter, I love went there with friend to spend all day doing snowboard with them. Furthermore, in the summer on the other side of Italy there is the sea, where are beautiful beaches, and places to camp. It was other places where I miss to go.
In conclusion, eventually Italy is the place that I would to came back because, I left a lot of friends, it has many places to visit, and the seasons are wonderful
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people have a lot of places where they wish to...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...important things that anyone could have an anyplace. So, when people want to return to some...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
... people want to return to some place in most of cases it is because they left or miss some ol...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'miss going', 'miss gonna'.
Suggestion: miss going; miss gonna
...es to camp. It was other places where I miss to go. In conclusion, eventually Italy is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29819277108 5.08290768461 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37275040337 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.51434878587 594% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6432739371 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2777777778 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282586821693 0.272083759551 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074882282651 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627971028118 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134717315003 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187664346221 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.3589403974 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 12.2367328918 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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