The passage describes the main disadvantages of chemical substance DDT, including its harm for the environment, human bodies and its failure in combatting diseases. However, the lecture claims that DDT usage is more beneficial and harmful.
The first arguable point is the impact of DDT on flora and fauna. The author of a reading states that the chemical accumulates in soil, bodies of animals and, thus, leads to the depopulation of living creatures. On the contrary, the lecturer highlights the fact that DDT in smaller quantities is not so devastating and instead helps to kill the damaging insects.
Next reason deals with the influence of DDT on human body. The reading implies that the consumption of sprayed DDT may cause diabetes, problems with birth and even cancer. Due to the passage, such catastrophic outcomes made the chemical forbidden in the US. However, the lecture asserts that when the DDT is consumed in small amounts, it has no bad effect on human health.
The last bone of contention is about the capability of DDT to combat malaria. The author of the reading contends that DDT failed to overcome the disease and, controversially, promoted the resistance of insects, that transmit dangerous diseases, to DDT. In the same time, a lecturer claims about the powerfulness of DDT in combatting malaria and positive applications of DDT as a counterfeit against insects in Shri Lanka.
In conclusion, the information presented in both passage and the lecture presents for and against arguments of DDT application. While the author of the passage accentuates on negative outcomes of the chemical for environment, human health and combatting malaria, the lecturer describes beneficial sides of DDT usage and its innocuousness in smaller quantities.
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- Easter Island, located in the Pacific Ocean about 4000 miles from the coast of Chile, is one of the most isolated places in the world. It is best known for the Moai, monolithic statues of human figures carved from volcanic rock and located around the isl 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 283.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27915194346 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97685511843 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519434628975 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6468427148 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719958274848 0.272083759551 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292674710019 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178459433098 0.0662205650399 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043241339412 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193961326468 0.0443174109184 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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