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The reading and the lecture are both about birds who can not discern between glass and open air. Whereas the author of the reading states that there are several solutions which can use to prevent harms to birds, the lecturer suggests that non of these solutions can stop birds from injuries. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points made in the reading by providing three reasons.
First of all, according to the reading, regular glass is the solution to the problem in a way the glass forms a solid barrier. However, the lecturer disputes this point. He says that these regular glasses have reflection and they reflact act like mirror. Furthermore, he mentions that the birds even do not understand the mirror and when they see the picture of sky or tree in them, they just fly to them.
Secondly, the reading states that buildings' windows could have a design of thin stripes pictured over the glass which help birds see the strips and eschew trying to fly through them. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument. He argues that birds percieve these openings between strips, for people in the building to see out, as an open whole and through them. In addition, he points out if this solution want to be successful, they should paint stipes extremly small, so this leads to be drak for anyone who is in the building.
Finally, the reading claims that creation an artificial magnetic filed helps to guide birds away from constructions. On the other hand, the lecturer believes that although the birds have a natural ability to sense Earth's magnetic field, they use them only in long distances travel. In fact, birds use Earth's magnetic field when migrate before winter to warm countries. Moreover, he feels that birds use their eyes and brightness of light for going from one side to another side. Therefore, an artificial magnetic filed have no effect on them.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- Do yo agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- If people want to contribute to the society, which of the following is the best way?1- riding bicycle or walking on foot2- recycling the waste3- buying local organic food 76
- Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., for people in the building to see out, as an open whole and through them. In ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8785046729 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3501034011 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2311770243 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0295204776068 0.272083759551 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0103438930009 0.0996497079465 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168716316543 0.0662205650399 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0202117773119 0.162205337803 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185494804053 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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