The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Rules in every society have exist and force people to obey them, unless they do not want to live in that society. Although adults people need to obey these rules in order to reach high cachet in society, children or young people are not excepted. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, young people are expected to follow and obey the rules which are too strict today. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore them in the following essay.
First and foremost, nowadays life is too complicated and if young people want to get reach proper standing in society, they should obey the rules as much as the others. Life complexity is a situation which exist in every developed society, and it takes people to set more and more rules for the sake of propensity in their society. Children as the most important part of a society should obey these rules, and assist their society in reaching their goal, society prosperity. My experience is a compelling example of this situation. When I was a high school student, we have to obey a lot of rules, like be on time, dress up suits, and so forth, which are made by head of the high school, and if we disobey them we got punishments (e.g. lose one week's entertainment). Although that are very simple rules that we should follow, we were in our youth and no one in this age wants to follow such rules. Therefore, not only are there a lot of rules, but also they should be obeyed by young people.
Second, society's progress leads to the level of life expectancy get higher and higher, which directly influence the majority of rules that young children should obey. Life expectancy as future of any person is an crucial factor, so every parents strive to set so many rules in their family for their young to guarantee their young's future. For instance, my parents since I can remember, worry about my future, and relatively most of our discussions were about my future. As a result, in each of these talks they sat a rule for me to what I should do or should not to do. Then, after all of these rules I just sometime think about am I a robot? Why should I follow these amounts of rules? Does society's progress depends on my future? Then guess what? I found all of my answers in my parents word saying "Yes, you should follow all these rules in order to be successful in your life and make society progress."
In conclusion, the amount of rules that are sat today for young people not only do not reduced, but also there are plenty of them exist since our life is too sophisticated and life expectancy are higher in the level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, if, second, so, then, therefore, after all, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50423728814 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40473474837 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7511598662 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418665479243 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134086895004 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137972382165 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295931251874 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127610558939 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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