integrated essay TPO17
The reading passage mainly discusses thta there are several hurmfule damage for wildlife espacially for birds by increasing of human population, he provides three reasons to supports. On the other hand, the professor refutes the authors' view by some reasons and he believes that these reasons are not conveniencable.
First of all, the article states that when population of human inhance, they need more place and settler, thus they expand in more locations which its result is decreas in population of birds. On the contrary, the speaker claims that birds have a abilities to find various habitats and they can fly in another cities and match at there.
In addition, the text asserts that as increasing in agricalture activities for prepare the fundamentaly needs of human, therfore, this makes more destructive of birds niches. However, in the lecture the speaker believes that this theory is tru that agriculture is not good for birds but not as mentioned on the reading. He argues that try to new products and hurvesting some crops is neccessary for human.
Finally, the reading atates thta by raising of human locations and need to producing more seeds and grains, due to use some dangerouse materials such as pesticides to protect thier products, thus, continue to decline of wildlif. while the proffesor posits that pesticides are hurmfulls for animals but this developed by groqing more crops geneticaly, which it dont need to use of pesticides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ary, the speaker claims that birds have a abilities to find various habitats and ...
^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ability' or simply 'abilities'?
Suggestion: a ability; abilities
...ary, the speaker claims that birds have a abilities to find various habitats and they can f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 68, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to produce'?
Suggestion: need to produce
... thta by raising of human locations and need to producing more seeds and grains, due to use some ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
..., thus, continue to decline of wildlif. while the proffesor posits that pesticides ar...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...groqing more crops geneticaly, which it dont need to use of pesticides.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, thus, while, in addition, such as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1512605042 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70509931778 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.485206393 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.222222222 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06452816374 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299969627758 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111881710617 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512782335056 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164198706311 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447492254843 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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